I was just thinking about this and basically what you're missing is points. I know it sucks going back to square one, but it'll be worth it in the end. So your first point is your sick of taking shit for dressing differently. So basically high school kids are so damn insecure about how they look that they need to make fun of you because you dress how you want. There's point one.

So just right down the shit your sick of and turn it into a critizism of high schoolers as a whole. Since it's satire, make sure to tease and use overexaggerations

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Awill3449 Reviewed by Awill3449 on . Help? If you don't remember I made a thread asking for help on writting a satiristic witty rant over high school for my short film I will be presenting to my high school video tech class.Heres what I have so far: High school, a place where a variety of teenagers can get togeather and learn in harmony regardless of there race,gender, or dress preference.The very place students can get togeather and expand there horizons with the nectar of education.Heh...you'd have to be a moron to beleive this.I Rating: 5