I was just thinking about this and basically what you're missing is points. I know it sucks going back to square one, but it'll be worth it in the end. So your first point is your sick of taking shit for dressing differently. So basically high school kids are so damn insecure about how they look that they need to make fun of you because you dress how you want. There's point one.

So just right down the shit your sick of and turn it into a critizism of high schoolers as a whole. Since it's satire, make sure to tease and use overexaggerations

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