Help?

[Wesley Pipes]

school is a torture ground, ppl are outcast and bullied for being an individual, all u can do is grit your teeth, push forward and hope that the daily 6 on 1 beatings won't kill you, and somehow, just somehow make the connections in friends that will last a lifetime while at the sametime hoping for that specail person to share all your anxieties and woes with. And when the school bell rings, it's time to escape your tormentors and head for the safety and warmth of your family friends and girlfriend to find love that only those few special ppl can provide.

Live On by Oscuro (my band)

Verse 1-
They all ignore me,
they don't accept me,
and they all hate me,
but still i live on,

Chorus -
Nowhere to run,
Nowhere to hide,
i'm all alone,
lost inside,

Verse 2 -
Do you realise,
What you have done,
you have taken my pride,
but still i live on,

Chorus -


Verse 3 -
What do i do,
now you have gone,
life just fell apart,
but still i live on,

Chorus -


Verse 4 -
Allthough my love is gone,
all i had is done,
you were the only one
but now i've moved on,

Chorus -


Solo part -

End

think kinda along the lines of 3 Doors Down - Be Like That from amercan pie 2 for the style of play

btw i wrote this when i was about 14 or 15 (5 or 6 years ago) it was the first song we ever wrote and it is copyrighted

[VoidLivesOn]

That sounds real good man, but thats sorta not what I'm aiming for in my rant.The whole beatings thing.In fact I'm not trying to make it sound like a torture ground because in no way when I'm in high school do I feel physicaly un-safe.Its more of shoot me now because this place and these people make me want to vomit.I know sort of overly dramatic huh? Who would wanna be shot in the head as in comparison to throwing up just because I'm to pansy to listen to my peers bitch everyday.

[Wesley Pipes]

That sounds real good man, but thats sorta not what I'm aiming for in my rant.The whole beatings thing.In fact I'm not trying to make it sound like a torture ground because in no way when I'm in high school do I feel physicaly un-safe.Its more of shoot me now because this place and these people make me want to vomit.I know sort of overly dramatic huh? Who would wanna be shot in the head as in comparison to throwing up just because I'm to pansy to listen to my peers bitch everyday.

teenagers are always gonna be vain dude, it's just part of the system, just like there will always be bullies.

:thumbsup:

peace and love

[Wesley Pipes]

oh btw way, a song u might wanna look up...

Millencolin - The Ballad :thumbsup:

peace

[VoidLivesOn]

OK Awill I got something new to add.It was like a spare of a moment thing, I just came up with it now but it might be lame.

High school is like a game.Is it a fun game? Thats up to you to decide.But if you think waking up before sunrise 5 days out of the week to get an education that half the population at your school dosn't even acknowledge is a waste of your time...try moving to China.

The china part I don't really know about, I'm just sort of clueless on how to end the 'graph.

[Wesley Pipes]

it is really just a game, a system, for some it's fun for others it's not, as much i would hate to relive school, i would go back if i had the chance, to do better and get better grades.

[VoidLivesOn]

Yeah I wish I could go back to Jr. High a little smarter so I could throw back all the bullshit they taught in worth the wait programs.Theres better ways to inform 12-15 y/o's about sex then telling them they'll burn in hell if they have pre-marital sex.Oh yeah then finish iceing the cake with a bunch of pictures of herpe infested dicks and roast beef vagina's.

[Wesley Pipes]

Yeah I wish I could go back to Jr. High a little smarter so I could throw back all the bullshit they taught in worth the wait programs.Theres better ways to inform 12-15 y/o's about sex then telling them they'll burn in hell if they have pre-marital sex.Oh yeah then finish iceing the cake with a bunch of pictures of herpe infested dicks and roast beef vagina's.

lmao :dance:

[Awill3449]

Haha, I like the point. yeah, I'm so sure about the China thing...dont they have more school. I dont know, maybe that was your point. Maybe something like : School is a game. A fun game? Well, thats up for you to decide. I mean, if you like playing games that make you wake up before sunrise 5 days a week just to sit in some boring computer class, then sure, its a fun game.

[pokin smot]

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