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01-10-2006, 06:13 AM #1OPSenior Member
Elipticism
I've become one with the way, how estarnged it may be.
No more worrisome days, i rest in peace...
Here it is again, my so famaliar clairvoyance.
No longer so changed, now only a nuance.
I find comfort in knowing this has happened before.
Even though ive wasted my life with meaningless chores.
The circle soothes me its rythm divine.
My spirit is free yet consequentially intertwined.
Im learning again, drifting away.
My spirit awaits, my reality changed.opiuser Reviewed by opiuser on . Elipticism I've become one with the way, how estarnged it may be. No more worrisome days, i rest in peace... Here it is again, my so famaliar clairvoyance. No longer so changed, now only a nuance. I find comfort in knowing this has happened before. Even though ive wasted my life with meaningless chores. The circle soothes me its rythm divine. My spirit is free yet consequentially intertwined. Rating: 5
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01-10-2006, 08:35 PM #2Senior Member
Elipticism
You need to release a book of your poems already, geez!
Honestly.
Your work is very good.
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01-10-2006, 08:53 PM #3Senior Member
Elipticism
enjoyed this one a LOT :rasta:
"the circle soothes me, its rythym divine"
puff puff pass