It's decent so far actually, it's sounds a little preachy if I think I understand what you're going for. Maybe freshen the language up a bit and use interesting and attention-grabbing phrases. Nice start though.
Its a Plant Reviewed by Its a Plant on . I could really use your help. So I got a camera from my grandma and I have a project comming up in video tech.I'm sure everyone in my class will be filming soccer games, football games, stupid ass made up commercials of the same things people did last year.But I wanted to shoot a 2-4 minute film over me walking through my high school in the morning before classes while reciting a witty,satiristic rant about high school.Anything good you think you can come up with please post it.Even if its one sentence.I want this to show Rating: 5