I could really use your help.

[VoidLivesOn]

So I got a camera from my grandma and I have a project comming up in video tech.I'm sure everyone in my class will be filming soccer games, football games, stupid ass made up commercials of the same things people did last year.But I wanted to shoot a 2-4 minute film over me walking through my high school in the morning before classes while reciting a witty,satiristic rant about high school.Anything good you think you can come up with please post it.Even if its one sentence.I want this to show my peers at my high school there lives really arn't that hard, and everyone has there own problems and deals with them there own way.People CAN be different and shit talking isn't necessary.

I won't necessarily post your name in the credits but I will make it clear I had help from many friends on the rant and did not come up with it all.Basically, I'm just gabba be the editor and narrator.

Any help would be wonderful.And if oyu have some great ideas message me on aim: Diet Aaron.

VoidLivesOn Reviewed by VoidLivesOn on 01-07-2006. I could really use your help. So I got a camera from my grandma and I have a project comming up in video tech.I'm sure everyone in my class will be filming soccer games, football games, stupid ass made up commercials of the same things people did last year.But I wanted to shoot a 2-4 minute film over me walking through my high school in the morning before classes while reciting a witty,satiristic rant about high school.Anything good you think you can come up with please post it.Even if its one sentence.I want this to show Rating: 5

[VoidLivesOn]

And I guess I'm not getting any.

[cambam]

And I guess I'm not getting any.

Just comment on the state of your school, point out mates, people you don't like. Peoples mannerisms, fashion sence etc.

[Its a Plant]

yeah just be really sarcastic about everything, and keep the same sort of tone throughout. I wrote a paper like that once in high school and it turned out really well. too bad I don't have it, but it was called something like "A typical day."

[VoidLivesOn]

Well heres what I have so far.

High School.....A place where a variety of teenagers can get togeather and learn in harmony regardless of there race, gender, or dress preference.Heh, beleive this and get ready to be eaten alive.What is a place like thats filled with young adults who hang off every word you tell them and believe 9 out of every 10 confrontations they encounter in a day there still always right.....

Thats it right now.Now if you think that sucks be brutaly honest.I'm ready to make this interesting for everyone, not to just tell myself its good over and over and have people thinking it sucks behind my back.

[Its a Plant]

It's decent so far actually, it's sounds a little preachy if I think I understand what you're going for. Maybe freshen the language up a bit and use interesting and attention-grabbing phrases. Nice start though.

[VoidLivesOn]

Alright from the point I'm at now I'll try and throw in some examples of what you just suggested.

Thanks.

[flamingskullballs]

whenever i want to make a movie...i tape random things in succession, get really stoned, and make an interpretation of these random things...then i say thats what the movie is about, and im finished

[Its a Plant]

here's also something to think about though a bit away from your idea:

In that paper I wrote, I compared high school with prison, and it worked great. That's where I used a sarcastic tone and sort of played off the whole idea.

Just a thought.

[3rdEyeVision]

give us more information, is it supposed to be on a certain topic etc...if not I suggest doing something easier. Go talk to homeless people and try and get informaton about why they "failed" and everything, and then compare their lives when they were young to your and your friends lives and whatnot.If you make it a sensitive topic you will probably get a better mark.You can just buy a burger or something and I'm sure they'd be willing to help.