If it was a first time, it was a really good effort. But that looks as if it consists of too much paper. As a general rule you should be able to see the contents through the paper. Next time cut it smaller.

I still manage to fuck up my roaches every single time. I'm getting a bit of a reputation for it. In the worst cases they slide out when I'm smoking, and it is a pain to get it back in.

When I get a Bluetooth adapter (I'd usually buy a 16th of weed instead) I'll share loads of pics from my phone. Until then I'd say this was my best roll ever.