Not The First Time

[UnViaje]

OK IM FEELING IT BUT

(as a world famous HIGHTLY telented POET) i say you need more DEPTH and BETRUSION

Try and baffle your viewers like:

i see i stand i dance i wee
i drink i devour i cry i pee
i sleep i wank my horse i spank

it kinda leads them guess anyway jump my 4 cents

too uniform
my intention was have a random flow

UnViaje Reviewed by UnViaje on 12-26-2005. Not The First Time wrote this last year to one main chick infatuated with me i'd also been out with for only a lil while, silly shit, just telling her reasons i didnt need her n simple wonder of the two way deception we had participated in, fun, she cried pace yourself gone, let it be the feeling is indifferent, spiritually pleasing indeed princess, i had pet you like the rest you relied on this, need not guess a supply of endless subliminal deception facades in the form of compliments successive Rating: 5