Not The First Time

[UnViaje]

wrote this last year to one main chick infatuated with me i'd also been out with for only a lil while, silly shit, just telling her reasons i didnt need her n simple wonder of the two way deception we had participated in, fun, she cried

pace yourself

gone, let it be
the feeling is indifferent, spiritually pleasing
indeed princess, i had pet you like the rest
you relied on this, need not guess
a supply of endless subliminal deception
facades in the form of compliments successive
never stoop, only transcend
for naive or accustomed to lies
instantly insisting to mourn in the end
lush flesh, wide eyed, silken hair
ill prepared for faux social fare
yes a beast i be, as my physical lure
instinctually yearned for that which is pure
as your physical urge for consuming sperm
i digress, we employed advances genuine
to still pretend
as which all succumb to
with purpose, unintentionally
embedded in the chasms of empathy
tainted with universal social need
a mutual essence
concede, had you relinquished the hedonism
if only, then i thought, the old adage
with age comes wisdom
unequivocally not law, naturally
dissapointed i continue
delved into various warmer venues
carnal escapement demersal, of course
the forces flowed uninhibited
coin it wickedness, humor me
in all seriousness, so many similar
again and again and again, satisfaction
was never dedicated, effect alone shone
and the the primal gravity of common interest
demiurge delusory

UnViaje Reviewed by UnViaje on 12-23-2005. Not The First Time wrote this last year to one main chick infatuated with me i'd also been out with for only a lil while, silly shit, just telling her reasons i didnt need her n simple wonder of the two way deception we had participated in, fun, she cried pace yourself gone, let it be the feeling is indifferent, spiritually pleasing indeed princess, i had pet you like the rest you relied on this, need not guess a supply of endless subliminal deception facades in the form of compliments successive Rating: 5

[NagChampa2010]

''as your physical urge for consuming sperm ''

you have a physical urge for consuming sperm?

[UnViaje]

no idiot, an x
retard

[Shelbay]

So you think it was fun because she cried? Not really sure from all those words put together like that,but if you are saying it was fun to make her cry,why would you think that's fun? Just curious.

[UnViaje]

the part where both of used deception was fun
she sobbed for a minute when she read it
after, i wasnt sympathetic, indifferent

[robert42]

OK IM FEELING IT BUT

(as a world famous HIGHTLY telented POET) i say you need more DEPTH and BETRUSION

Try and baffle your viewers like:

i see i stand i dance i wee
i drink i devour i cry i pee
i sleep i wank my horse i spank

it kinda leads them guess anyway jump my 4 cents

[UnViaje]

OK IM FEELING IT BUT

(as a world famous HIGHTLY telented POET) i say you need more DEPTH and BETRUSION

Try and baffle your viewers like:

i see i stand i dance i wee
i drink i devour i cry i pee
i sleep i wank my horse i spank

it kinda leads them guess anyway jump my 4 cents

too uniform
my intention was have a random flow

[opiuser]

''as your physical urge for consuming sperm ''

you have a physical urge for consuming sperm?

damn... your pretty dense.

that was a pretty good poem dude.

that line in particular was funny for me.

but im stoned so... yeah.

I got some better bud that i had been getting . mmmmmmmmm... I am fucking BLAZED.

peace

[UnViaje]

thanx, i'm blazn good shit too
badazz

[robert42]

i like ya style

we should do a duet