god

[opiuser]

Unveil thee from the shadows,
And writhe within the storm.
Across the skies and down to earth
Make thy presence known.

Show yourself with flash and fire.
And move the ground from which you came.
Shake and shatter thru the air.
Make the wicked fall into despair

May the hand of god reach out and scorch them.
May your wrath be quick and pure.
Smite me lord, and ill bow down for you.
Give me what they think i deserve.

I sense confusion, suspect a lie.
While all my pleasures are denied.
Mislead me, decieve thee.
Punish me for no need.

Your righteous puppet am i

opiuser Reviewed by opiuser on 12-05-2005. god Unveil thee from the shadows, And writhe within the storm. Across the skies and down to earth Make thy presence known. Show yourself with flash and fire. And move the ground from which you came. Shake and shatter thru the air. Make the wicked fall into despair Rating: 5

[dustoned]

did you write that? QUESTION EXISTENCE \m/

[opiuser]

yeah\... i write all the poetry i post here.

in this one i focused more on the meaning and riddle than with rhyming (as is obvious)... yet i still brought freestyle rhyme. the words dont necessarily rhyme, but they are spoken with harmony

[jahjahjahjah]

i dont believe in god i think religon is a mental disorder.

[50BagOfGreens]

^lol, i dont belive in god i belive people made god so they could say that there is a meaing to life. good poem man

[LightGreen]

i also dont beleive in god why should i believe something just because someone tells me its right, and the history of god and santa clause make about the same amount of sense to me

[radioned]

god is a dj

[opiuser]

i dont beleive in the god that religions belive in...

this poem's about the deception they give

[P.E.N.G.U.I.N.]

All hail the almighty DJ GOD!