anti god

[motorcycletony222]

as darkness starts its nightly reign
shadows claim the livings domain

with the light go all hope
as the hangman readies his rope

the gunshots echo so near
the dead know no fear

walking alone and running scared
only the darkness seems to care

hold on to loved ones ever so tight
be ready with battle and a good fight

creeping in the mist the nightmare begins
mustnt let the undertaker win

stay alert and dont make a sound
for death is all around

never retreat carry the fight on
make it to daybreak and youll have won

shadows retreat a new day abounds
to the coffins without nearly a sound





two for the price of one


Wandering the Earth alone,
without a sound,
forever to thirst,
never to be found.
Naked I entered,
through the chaos I see,
gunshot to the head,
in a coffin I flee.
Should of made my peace,
with heaven and above,
I'm the one who's sorry,
for never finding love.
Turned away from life,
Its plain to see,
that a life of sorrow,
is befitting of me.
Should have bowwed my head,
when the shots rang out,
for my head is the intended,
a life filled with doubt.
Down through the ground,
a new master for me,
for I'm his only son,
the devils in me..

motorcycletony222 Reviewed by motorcycletony222 on 12-04-2005. anti god as darkness starts its nightly reign shadows claim the livings domain with the light go all hope as the hangman readies his rope the gunshots echo so near the dead know no fear walking alone and running scared Rating: 5

[opiuser]

i didn't like the first one, but the second was pretty damn good

[ScarlettCrush]

2nd one! :clap:

[motorcycletony222]

Thank you, they both came from the same time in my life. Running amuck on the streets, playing with guns. One day this dude set out to kill someone and he picked me. Thank God he could not shoot straight, killed my best friend who standing next to me. Maybe he was the lucky one he got it between the eyes, no pain, that was left for me. Could not afford a shrink, hell the lawyer bills were killin me, started writing to release. Ive been carring this big ass box around for ten years, havent let many eyeballs take a peak. I guess its time to let them go. Just got a sign from the man upstairs, its snowing here on Brasstown Bald.

[UnViaje]

yeah i was feelin the second one tony except for heaven, but still badazz. tho the the 8th couplet in the first one i agree with sincerely.