do not disturb

[opiuser]

dont wake me up, let me trip thru my head...
All is black and numb but i notice the light.
It arises befor me, and slowly thru it i am lead.
On my left is the day, and evening lies to the right.

Push and pull as i lean away,
Driven back forth in my dismay.
I am overcome by this
I was not prepared for this...
No matter what i thought was coming for me.
None is known till i actually see.

And so i break free my earthly body.
To search for what I see to be godly.
Swim and writhe amongst the heavens.
I ascend unto the realms of the enlightened

opiuser Reviewed by opiuser on 11-29-2005. do not disturb dont wake me up, let me trip thru my head... All is black and numb but i notice the light. It arises befor me, and slowly thru it i am lead. On my left is the day, and evening lies to the right. Push and pull as i lean away, Driven back forth in my dismay. I am overcome by this I was not prepared for this... No matter what i thought was coming for me. Rating: 5

[50BagOfGreens]

once agian, im amazed

[dev]

dont wake me up, let me trip thru my head...
All is black and numb but i notice the light.
It arises befor me, and slowly thru it i am lead.
On my left is the day, and evening lies to the right.

Push and pull as i lean away,
Driven back forth in my dismay.
I am overcome by this
I was not prepared for this...
No matter what i thought was coming for me.
None is known till i actually see.

And so i break free my earthly body.
To search for what I see to be godly.
Swim and writhe amongst the heavens.
I ascend unto the realms of the enlightened

cool story, poem or what ever but can u rephrase that so i know what ur on about plz

[Cleveland]

shut

[Cleveland]

the

[Cleveland]

hell

[Cleveland]

up!

[50BagOfGreens]

^ hmmm you seem to be so imature that you cant appreciate good poetry

[dev]

^ hmmm you seem to be so imature that you cant appreciate good poetry

LOL!! obviously not, it is a good poem looks like some people just dont like poetry

or maybe hes not high enough lol

[fikusroot]

in all honesty it isnt that good of a poem