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11-16-2005, 02:17 PM #1OPSenior Member
SoColdSoOld
The chosen one
from the land
of the frozen sun
where drunk nights
get remembered more
than sober ones, we was
never taught to run but
came guided outta sight
full blinded
like a pot head i feel
open mindedrobert42 Reviewed by robert42 on . SoColdSoOld The chosen one from the land of the frozen sun where drunk nights get remembered more than sober ones, we was never taught to run but came guided outta sight full blinded like a pot head i feel Rating: 5
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11-16-2005, 10:15 PM #2Senior Member
SoColdSoOld
That's cool Robert, not a lot of content in this one... :what:
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11-17-2005, 05:51 PM #3OPSenior Member
SoColdSoOld
should i go back to my abstract poems?
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11-17-2005, 08:40 PM #4Senior Member
SoColdSoOld
Umm, I think this is pretty abstract, but a turn towards the content and the meaning of the content would probably shoot your poetry through the roof! :stoned: