It's good. It flows, while still managing to skip from thought to thought, not something easy to do.

I am the fish and i am the bear... as you eat me, i devour you...
but it is only to make you whole.
this in particular is a very profound insight.
sobriquet Reviewed by sobriquet on . philosophy... here's a sample of my poetry... (dont read it in a literal way, or you will not understand) "I are that you am" Within your lies, the truth unfolds... Abandoned child, why do you cry? Know you not you have more than i? A life to live, and love to give. A heart that beats, an eye that weeps. but can it see the being am i Rating: 5