philosophy...

[opiuser]

here's a sample of my poetry... (dont read it in a literal way, or you will not understand)

"I are that you am"

Within your lies, the truth unfolds...
Abandoned child, why do you cry?
Know you not you have more than i?
A life to live, and love to give.
A heart that beats, an eye that weeps.
but can it see the being am i

I am the fish and i am the bear... as you eat me, i devour you...
but it is only to make you whole.
I am the truth and the lie, i am the spark of the divine.
I are you, and you am me, just as she is he who seets you free.

We are one, A god we be, A righteous man and a childish theif.
The light in night, the virgin whore.
The yin and yan, the gentle scorned.
We are the flesh from which we bled, so lay thee down and rest your head.

opiuser Reviewed by opiuser on 11-15-2005. philosophy... here's a sample of my poetry... (dont read it in a literal way, or you will not understand) "I are that you am" Within your lies, the truth unfolds... Abandoned child, why do you cry? Know you not you have more than i? A life to live, and love to give. A heart that beats, an eye that weeps. but can it see the being am i Rating: 5

[sobriquet]

It's good. It flows, while still managing to skip from thought to thought, not something easy to do.

I am the fish and i am the bear... as you eat me, i devour you...
but it is only to make you whole.

this in particular is a very profound insight.

[Monkey4Sale]

not really, it's the whole snake eating itself thing.

[Stoner Shadow Wolf]

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[opiuser]

that line is actually from an old one that i wrote... but i can't find it nor can i remember it... which sux cuz it was my best ever...

I wrote this one on the spot. my poetry just comes to me and i must write it down or i lose it.

all of my girlfriends (the only people i usually share any of my poetry with) always said that when i philosophized the words flowed poetically and lyrically... which is strange cuz normally i cant speak straight.

[opiuser]

hey... i think they should make another forum for philosophy and poetry... it doesnt really fit into any of the other ones, not even spirituality

[Polymirize]

yeah, there's really not an applicable area for true word spoken poetry on this site... but if you make the thread, I'll show up and read.






and Monkey, the ouroborus is an eternal concept, but that doesn't mean it can't be expressed in new ways. Don't steal thunder...

[50BagOfGreens]

i give props to the writer because you must of put alot of effort into it. nice to see a non lazy stoner. unlike me

[Stoner Shadow Wolf]

personally, i feel it fits very well with spirituality, but a seperate forum wouldn't hurt either... lol

but that's a damn good poem man

[carbe23]

gladyou reminded me. Got enough problems - I don't tough it but...I am down here injerez (Barney Tea Shop...right nest to the scupture garden- monthly opne call art shows...got a xerox right here to help you out if necessary) and...freds runs amok and...I'm worried; in the nature fo the area.

a lot of barney news but...didn't save it all ; Fredss in a bad mood; fred did all these launches..cruising arond in a vette sudenly, wierd guys with like...3 dels and fixed pcs wired togther; sticking tooth pics through selected web pages..like...souled copys of road and track with the new caymen island p; washing down singles...pathtic...absolutly pathtec;; new barmaids...aprently...they only come in threes...latter.

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