I like the beginning, good opening...you should either pluralized "rastaman" or add an "s" to "grasp", sorry...

Robert doesn't worry, he just writes his poems
As he thinks with his brain, his nostrils flair, his mouth foams
No telling anyone, as he sits at his home, alone
He just thinks it's funny and wants to be called "Samone"
beachguy in thongs Reviewed by beachguy in thongs on . This poem is called: WHAT IS LIFE? O what is weed if full of care? we have no time to stand and share no time to watch as rastaman grasp sittin back puffing on grass no time to watch as the world goes by sitting back bong ripping gettin high, Rating: 5