Very nice. I like it a lot. Just for kicks I'll post one of my favorite poems of mine. Note, mine don't rhyme, they're almost always free verse.

[align=center]My Final Poem

One day, I'll be an author.
They'll find me in a red bathtub,
because I went down the highway,
not across the street.
Sheets of my poetry will be scattered on the floor
and a note will be in my hand.
And scrawled in black permanant Sharpie will be:
Dear whoever it is who finds me,
make sure that I am remembered
and that no one forgets who I am.
Make sure that they all read what I have written.
Yours truly.
And then one day, when I never come out of the bathroom,
they'll kick down the door and break the lock.
Someone will gasp and look away.
Someone will cry.
Someone will throw up.
Someone will just stare.
But they will all read the note and my poetry,
and not one of them will forget the day they found me dead.
A book in my memory will be published,
a collection of my writings and memoirs from the people who knew me.
People will read it and my name will live on forever.
My parents will be devastated.
They will blame themselves and wonder where they went wrong,
but they never did.
Our branch of the family tree will stop with me,
because I was an only child.
But it's okay, because I'll be famous.
And while I am waiting for the water to turn red,
I'll be writing my final poem.
And it will be the best poem that I have ever written.
I will write it on the wall, so the water does not wash it away.
My final poem.
That will be the title.
It will be the one that everyone loves.
People will quote it in their books,
and some will copy it in their journals.
Someone will have a copy of it taped to their mirror.
And some kid will use it as his suicide note,
and he'll be remembered too.
And we'll be remembered together.[/align]