my story

[padro420kmk]

yea i feel you i wouldnt wanna read some shit like that in morning.

It's not $h!t just too many words for me first thing in the
morning.

[king kong bong]

ahaha maybe i shoulda posted a paragraph at a time.

[padro420kmk]

I'm with you there. :thumbsup:

i made my way throu 3 sentences before smoke came out my ears.

[anycraic]

what films that from,
king kong bong....

[king kong bong]

what do you mean?

[anycraic]

the av

[king kong bong]

oh,its gary oldman from true romance.

[anycraic]

yeah cool now remember it

[anycraic]

lol talkin shit across the atlantic

[Roadking]

That's some good writing. Fill it in with dialogue between the characters and it will really come to life.

EXAMPLE

"holy mother of god, He's got an axe," she screamed.

"So, what you want me to do about it?" he replied.

you can write a book