Quote Originally Posted by Fan o KmK
^ aw fuck him, mayb hes got a few good points but overall the paper rules, ive converted someone already. but yea u might want to make it a bit more powerful, or something, fuck if i know im stoned lol

I might be misunderstanding you, but if your refering to the paper,I would like to meet the shallow individual who was convinced of anything by such a poorly written paper. Christ, take some criticism, don't just blow it off. 99% of the people who read this won't give a shit about what you have to say so at the very least, fix your paper.

Think about it-- I'm FOR pot legalization, and your paper didn't convince me of anything... imagine somebody who's against legalization?

Be real, you think you can write perfect papers in one shot? Honestly man, thinking this paper will do anything short of pissing off some faculty members is absurd. Listen to criticism before you listen to your supporters, or at the very least before you pass this thing out.
zooted999 Reviewed by zooted999 on . First Draft Here it is. My First Draft in all of its Glory and Splendor. read! Marijuana By Jake Martinez In our society there are many forms of Crime. From the Speeder caught unawares while he was simply dozing off on a long, boring drive, to the Mass Murderer sitting in his basement killing small animals in some sort of Sadistic Ritual. Most of our Laws in this glorious United States of America have been made with the good of the people in mind. Some of them, however, arenâ??t so Justly Rating: 5