First Draft

[Fan o KmK]

^ aw fuck him, mayb hes got a few good points but overall the paper rules, ive converted someone already. but yea u might want to make it a bit more powerful, or something, fuck if i know im stoned lol

[Hempamasta]

Nice job. I think that your paper is very well written. You may want to look at another means of spreading around your information, however, because nobody's really going to listen to a pothead that's littering his school or community with his propoganda. Just my two cents.

[zooted999]

^ aw fuck him, mayb hes got a few good points but overall the paper rules, ive converted someone already. but yea u might want to make it a bit more powerful, or something, fuck if i know im stoned lol

I might be misunderstanding you, but if your refering to the paper,I would like to meet the shallow individual who was convinced of anything by such a poorly written paper. Christ, take some criticism, don't just blow it off. 99% of the people who read this won't give a shit about what you have to say so at the very least, fix your paper.

Think about it-- I'm FOR pot legalization, and your paper didn't convince me of anything... imagine somebody who's against legalization?

Be real, you think you can write perfect papers in one shot? Honestly man, thinking this paper will do anything short of pissing off some faculty members is absurd. Listen to criticism before you listen to your supporters, or at the very least before you pass this thing out.

[lateralus]

I hate that!
Me- "wanna smoke?"
Them- "nah im a drinker"
Me-"FUCK YOU!"

lol

[DazedandConfused]

that's nice

[P.E.N.G.U.I.N.]

okay this isn't a paper meant to sway anyone one way or another. it's meant for someone to have all the facts before them, and then make an honest decision of their own. i've shown this to hardcore anti-pot people, and as long as they weren't busy laughing in my face for being so extreme, it made them think a bit. and yeah the subtlety about giving glory to this Country so many time was meant to sound slightly condescending. quit judging it as a persuasive paper, it's a research paper with slight overtones of persuasion. BY THE WAY I TOLD YOU GUYS TO WAIT UNTIL I WAS SURE IT WAS PERFECT BEFORE YOU STARTED PASSING IT OUT! IT IS DOING A GREAT JOB AS IS, BUT IT STILL NEEDS SOME MORE! IM 15 FOR CHRISSAKES! HELP ME!

[TheAtomicPunk]

Yea, i have too many friends that drink but wont smoke.

anyways, PENGUIN!!! they're printing as i type

[P.E.N.G.U.I.N.]

to zooted999: the paper's there, take the liberty of fixing it yourself. if you think you can handle it without messing it up, that is. already no one belives me that i did this myself they think i cheated. and plaguirism is only a problem if i take things word for word. all the research for my paper came from everything i've picked up and looked at the past few months. and one last thing, if i were to get to zealous for my point, i would conceal more facts. i didn't conceal one fact for why weed should be illegal. i even held back some things that are good about it, like industry (paper, rope)

[P.E.N.G.U.I.N.]

god i love you, punk

[TheAtomicPunk]

and you didnt say anything about how you could turn it into gas and that the country could almost run on entirely marijuana.