here are my tips:

a second guitar would be good

change your singer, sometimes he haves this gay voice and now he tries to do some black metal voice, doesnt mix togetehr dude

and song should chnage a bit of rythmic sometimes. its just a lil bit boring to hear alkways the same rythm

anyway good luck with your band
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