the ending was great,and it has a good rhyme scheme,i love it
KronicKing Reviewed by KronicKing on . The Goldfish in the Bong - A short poem I wrote this for another web site, but thought it was pretty funny and worth posting here. Curious if it IS funny, or if I am just high... I had a little goldfish I kept her in a bowl Until I knocked it over Which was surely not my goal I knew that little Goldie Would probably not last long Unless she got some water quick Rating: 5