just felt like writing...

[katisse]

when i look into the mirror,
see my eyes looking back at me,
i dont know what i am
or who im s'posed to be...
am i who i was at 7?
or even 17?
or in some metamorphosis
that i cant grasp it seems?
perhaps i'll find the answer
when this body fades to dust
and the enigma of myself
will be clarified and just...
for this flesh is not the answer
nor that which makes me whole...
i am more than this image peering back
instead a reflection of my soul.

kat


Ever really look at your own eyes? really let them look back at you? Its LIke being recognized by you as something else.

katisse Reviewed by katisse on 05-03-2005. just felt like writing... when i look into the mirror, see my eyes looking back at me, i dont know what i am or who im s'posed to be... am i who i was at 7? or even 17? or in some metamorphosis that i cant grasp it seems? perhaps i'll find the answer when this body fades to dust Rating: 5

[Hydrizzle]

u gotta be a fireman

[Stedric]

I don't get Hydrizzle's comment...but good stuff.

[Smokin2]

Wow, excellent poetry.
Wish I had talent like that. Since I don't I will simply enjoy the talent's of those such as yourself. Thanks for sharing.

[Darkneon420]

I feel like that all the time...not exactly like that but somewhat...I mean who am I? Looking in the mirror is really weird...other times I just dont care. Great poem kat!. And welcome to the forum

[JSTA]

That was really good.

[katisse]

Thx all...
Happy to be here among fellow stoners.

[jimbones]

the eyes are the window to your soul it,s easy to stare into your own eyes if your conscience is clear peace

[sToNeDpEnGuIn420]

Kat wth is ur avatar lol it looks like a ferret that has water come out of it or some shit lol

[katisse]

I'll be damned if I know...I was stoned and (at that time) thought...wow, that is so cool. I dont know what it is, but I got it off a site of anime called shamanic princess. Keep looking, theres no telling what I might come up with. lol