That draft seems reasonable to me. I agree with the main point: anyone can smoke, possess or grow, and transfers under an ounce are OK without money changing hands. Commercial growers will be regulated similar to MMCs: labeling, security, health and safety, and some advertising and signage restrictions.

Also, as a general matter, I trust SAFER more than I do CTI. In any case, I'll be happy to support whatever proposition makes it on the ballot. Any liberalization of drug policy will get my vote.