Results 1 to 6 of 6
Threaded View
-
04-29-2005, 02:16 AM #1OPSenior Member
honest oppinion
hey i write lyrics, i wrote this song in about 5-10 miniutes...i need to know if it is any good, it is for my band and we play mailnly modern indie rock, so tell me what you think and be honest
i gotta break out
before i break down
repetition never ending
your words flailing around
the pain fills the void
that plauges my heart
the pain fills my void
as soon as i start
its better to love a loser
than it is to lose a lover
your others not perfect
but theres no other
for you
im gonna break out
before i break down
hush your pretty lips
dont even think a sound
i love the pain
i feel inside
intense agony like
a dagger in my side
its better to love a loser
than it is to lose a lover
your others not perfect
but theres no other
for you
when shes all ive got
where do i turn to when shes not there
shes all ive got
where do i turn to
i turn to no wherekoshea Reviewed by koshea on . honest oppinion hey i write lyrics, i wrote this song in about 5-10 miniutes...i need to know if it is any good, it is for my band and we play mailnly modern indie rock, so tell me what you think and be honest i gotta break out before i break down repetition never ending your words flailing around the pain fills the void that plauges my heart the pain fills my void as soon as i start Rating: 5
Advertisements
Similar Threads
-
soap dilluted in water as a pesticide...what is your oppinion?
By IrishBudSmoker in forum Plant ProblemsReplies: 4Last Post: 07-23-2009, 12:16 AM -
Im Gona be honest
By Frank_The_Tank in forum ExperiencesReplies: 4Last Post: 04-02-2007, 12:28 AM -
Just be HONEST and say...
By Garden Knowm in forum GreenGrassForums LoungeReplies: 35Last Post: 02-02-2007, 11:54 AM -
be honest
By NightProwler in forum GreenGrassForums LoungeReplies: 29Last Post: 03-12-2006, 07:09 AM -
honest oppinion (new age rock music)
By koshea in forum GreenGrassForums LoungeReplies: 12Last Post: 02-07-2006, 03:46 AM