hey i write lyrics, i wrote this song in about 5-10 miniutes...i need to know if it is any good, it is for my band and we play mailnly modern indie rock, so tell me what you think and be honest

i gotta break out
before i break down
repetition never ending
your words flailing around
the pain fills the void
that plauges my heart
the pain fills my void
as soon as i start

its better to love a loser
than it is to lose a lover
your others not perfect
but theres no other
for you

im gonna break out
before i break down
hush your pretty lips
dont even think a sound
i love the pain
i feel inside
intense agony like
a dagger in my side


its better to love a loser
than it is to lose a lover
your others not perfect
but theres no other
for you

when shes all ive got
where do i turn to when shes not there
shes all ive got
where do i turn to
i turn to no where
koshea Reviewed by koshea on . honest oppinion hey i write lyrics, i wrote this song in about 5-10 miniutes...i need to know if it is any good, it is for my band and we play mailnly modern indie rock, so tell me what you think and be honest i gotta break out before i break down repetition never ending your words flailing around the pain fills the void that plauges my heart the pain fills my void as soon as i start Rating: 5