hey guys, just saw a thread with some writing (poem) and i thought why not. usually i write for myself, mainly to make myself feel better about whatever may be happening at the time and dont really show these to anyone but ill show you some.

let me know your thoughts


-devoid


why is it,
that when one becomes content
everything seems so fragile and frail?
like an endless downpour of emotion
into an increasingly smaller basin

despite hard fought efforts,
and biased opinions,
our emotions remain stirred; jaded
by these iron clad truths

ever pondering our existence,
we look above,
questions unanswered;
souls of martyrdom.

where is this balence?
to life,
to ourselves,
in which we so longingly seek?

once vibrant and true,
now devoid of thought and purpose
we stumble around
trying to solve this equation.


-to be titled


life is one time deal. there is no retry, or fail safe.
thinking thoughts of void we strive to determine a purpose.
a purpose for life, but more importantly, to give ourselves meaning.
for often in this world we see tragedies, wars, and famine. lost souls begging for a new beggining.
every single day can be the beggining of a new life, should you choose to take action, admit your faults and have the determination to keep trying.
life is about choice, and in turn what you choose to make it.
jessem98 Reviewed by jessem98 on . let me know what you think hey guys, just saw a thread with some writing (poem) and i thought why not. usually i write for myself, mainly to make myself feel better about whatever may be happening at the time and dont really show these to anyone but ill show you some. let me know your thoughts -devoid why is it, that when one becomes content Rating: 5