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    Tangent realities. Short self-portraying story

    Criticize me all you want please

    Tangent Realityâ??s

    The nights late again, gotta wake up early and start my day again. Slowly I fall into my sleepy haze, viewing 2-D images like Iâ??ll never see them again that way. Then I start to realize.

    Before Sensimilla, my life was filled with anxiety, doubt, depression and thoughts of myself not being real. Now though, I feel alive like I can be myself again. Enlightenment is on my shoulders. I no longer live in the past and have a fear of the future, but now I live in the moment and hope for the future.

    As Iâ??m dreaming, subliminal messages wake me up and allow me to start my day. I hop in the shower for a good 7 minutes of the hour. Usually I do the daily after this while throwing on something to wear. Then I head to school with some green tea to share.

    Graduation is near, and I need to be in the clear. So I tend to not drink beer. I try to do my best, but I really need some rest. My old though provoking lifestyle has led me to what seems to be a never ending abyss. Five years ago, I discovered a way out. I just wish that society could recognize the fact.

    For five years, sheâ??s been by my side, even if I want to fly. I donâ??t want to imagine my life again in grief. But I know if I have to, I can always find my way back.

    Anyways itâ??s getting late again and Iâ??m looking forward to starting a new day again. So excuse me while I light my spliff.
    ADM Reviewed by ADM on . Tangent realities. Short self-portraying story Criticize me all you want please :) Tangent Realityâ??s The nights late again, gotta wake up early and start my day again. Slowly I fall into my sleepy haze, viewing 2-D images like Iâ??ll never see them again that way. Then I start to realize. Before Sensimilla, my life was filled with anxiety, doubt, depression and thoughts of myself not being real. Now though, I feel alive like I can be myself again. Enlightenment is on my shoulders. I no longer live in the past and have a Rating: 5

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    Tangent realities. Short self-portraying story

    lol, I hope this is the right section

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    Tangent realities. Short self-portraying story

    I think you got the right section.

    What sorta jumped off the page at me was the fact that the plural of reality is "realities." I fixed it in your headline because, well, it begged to be fixed and because I think cannabis advocates can stand to look as sharp as possible, especially when writing about the wonders of cannabis as a mode of enlightenment.
    [SIZE=\"4\"]\"That best portion of a good man\'s life: his little, nameless, unremembered acts of kindness and love.\"[/SIZE]
    [align=center]William Wordsworth, English poet (1770 - 1850)[/align]

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    Tangent realities. Short self-portraying story

    I know the plural is realities. I was trying to directly refer to 2 seperate realities, by saying Reality as one state, and by adding 's would intale me smoking weed.. dunno if it makes sense but i was high when i wrote it, so it might only make sense to me.


    ah damn I cant even change it back to Reality's

    Would you mind changing it back for me?

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