if you read the comments below it, a lot of them are pretentious jerks who tell the guy off, they tell them how it should be instead of letting him do with it what he will, they didnt really have any advice, and in my opinion, they didnt understand what he was writing. To me it was basically his story of how he started smoking, it has a linear progression even though it has classification analysis of why he does. Some of them tried to say that you cant have a personal life with other people like a family if you smoke, which is outrageous, plenty of people on here do it. but i think it was well written.