any1 ever sat there naked and stared into the abyss lookin from the keyhole of time

[Climbing High]

sorry, its kind of long. any ideas for a name to that poem?

[robert42]

call it MOHIBA

[robert42]

This is called Roberts got a brand new jeep

roberts got a brand new jeep
hes naked
roberts got a brand new jeep
he laughtin
roberts got a brand new jeep
hes crying
roberts got a brand new jeep
hes dead.

[Climbing High]

robert you must be so baked right now. im officially jealous.

[ermitonto]

A little poem I wrote. I call it "Existential Modes of Being and their Relationship to the Human Psyche"

There once was a girl from Regina,
Who had an infected vagina,
'Twas the cause of her death,
And she used her last breath,
To say "Somebody get me a gyne--!"

[SuburbanLife224]

after an intense salvia tripp i was inspired to write about it, but i just couldnt put it into words because it was something not of this world. i tried making a poem to give a vague description of it...tell me what you think:
something is present
a giant void in life
a gaping hole in reality
stretching farther and farther.
when all is consumed
will reality end?
what is reality?
simply a state of mind.
earth will be enveloped
by a state of mind
and the hole will keep stretching.
the world becomes darker
but through the darkness a tingling light shines,
and flows from it acceptance of no more
reality, what is real?
colors? shapes? emotions?
all states of mind.
all can be overcome
by this widening gapwrapping itself around
the lifeless form of reality
like a hungry amoeba.
as humans, in this
winding, curving cycle
realize your eventuality
make life a reality
to yourself.
to all else i am a picture.
a simple name linked to a face,
a body,
a petsonality.
stored in the proteins of the mind and the machine.
we are fragments of time,
and our building blocks of life will collapse
like the great aztec empire.
the spears and swords
of our minds may fight,
but the tear in our cycle
will destroy our minds
destroying our reality.

hey i REALLY liked that and i think i almost understand it, haha. glad to see someone thinks a bit like me. well it was great.

hope i'm not wrong but is it about how society is so structured, and people are getting farther and farther away from what we were meant to be. we live , do, and think as we are told. yadda yadda... could go on but i would feel stupid if i was wrong . lol. peace

[az666]

everyday

[robert42]

This is called Oh Shiba WHY THE FUCK DID U HAVE TO GO DOWN ON ME.

Oh Shiba please dont
Oh Shiba i said no
Oh Shiba put it back
Oh Shiba zip me back up
Oh Shiba IF U WANNA FUCKIN SUCK IT GET SUM FUCKIN TEETH U GUMMY BITCH!

[Euphoric]

This is called Oh Shiba WHY THE FUCK DID U HAVE TO GO DOWN ON ME.

Oh Shiba please dont
Oh Shiba i said no
Oh Shiba put it back
Oh Shiba zip me back up
Oh Shiba IF U WANNA FUCKIN SUCK IT GET SUM FUCKIN TEETH U GUMMY BITCH!

wtf...stop complaining shiba's the best!!!

[Looker]

NO BUT I'VE DONE THIS.....