Quote Originally Posted by FlyGuyOU
must've been working on your novel, right? doing some good character development here? really getting us involved with the story? is that what you've been working on? hmmm?? got a good plot going on? real twists and turns? something the audience wouldn't expect eh? gonna take us all on a real ride huh? maybe some romance? been doing a nice love story? something nice and exotic? gonna make a really good novel hmm? with uhh some solid characters? these last two years eh?
make those... second hundred pages really keep the reader guessing? everybody learns the hero's journey isn't always a happy one?