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    #1
    Senior Member

    The Poetry Thread

    Please post original poems here.

    Hit This

    hit this
    do it now
    inhale exhale
    you know you want to
    I know I want to
    breathe in breath out

    rush donâ??t stop
    relax
    easy now
    feel it

    lovely
    relax
    my friend
    be at peace

    let you soul
    be overwhelmed
    the astral insight
    is revealed

    realize the shamanistic
    significance
    mm
    every green herb for man
    and God called it good
    angry nomad Reviewed by angry nomad on . The Poetry Thread Please post original poems here. Hit This hit this do it now inhale exhale you know you want to I know I want to breathe in breath out Rating: 5

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  3.     
    #2
    Senior Member

    The Poetry Thread

    I wrote an original poem today after reading 'The Voice' by Thomas Hardy. I shall post his poem first, then mine.

    The Voice

    Woman much missed, how you call to me, call to me,
    Saying that now you are not as you were
    When you had changed from the one who was all to me,
    But s at first, when our day was fair.

    Can it be you that I hear? Let me view you, then,
    Standing as when i drew near to the town
    Where you would wait for me: yes, as i knew you then,
    Even to the original air-blue gown!

    Or is it only the breeze, in its listlessness
    Travelling across the wet mead to me here,
    You being ever dissolved to existlessness
    Hear no more again far or near?

    Thus I; faltering forward
    Leaves around me falling
    Wind oozing thin through the thorn from norward,
    And the woman calling.

    Here's my poem:

    Healing takes time

    Why can emotions become just so...
    Why must my mind remain in woe
    Overbearing, powerful and tough
    While thoughts recycle, the loss is rough

    This person who has such effects
    Leaves and moves on, without regrets
    Pain and loss and loneliness
    All on earth that i had left

    Tears fell down my face that day
    No one yurns to feel that way
    A bench, alone, a park, at dark
    Where was hope to make its mark?

    Life goes by and time goes on
    Good times shared, the sun that shone
    Memories stay, I shall not forget
    Bad days there, and then she was gone...

    I wanted her back, my feelings were true
    She doesn't know me, infact: 'Who are you?'
    Once there was closeness, and then i felt empty
    Emotions that effect me, the desires that tempt me

    Healing takes time, hearts heal not in a day
    I longed for contentment, again I say
    I strive on to find happiness again
    I continue to smile, up until then...

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    #3
    Senior Member

    The Poetry Thread

    The Burning

    Sinuous tendrils of serpentine smoke,
    Sweetly caress and viciously choke.
    I Feel now the blisters,
    And feel now the pain,
    In this fell era,
    When madness does reign.
    Shed not a tear for me,
    Vainly now burned.
    Though death may now court me,
    My heart has not turned.
    One day there will come,
    Sweet reasonâ??s repose,
    And sad chapters of fear,
    At last shall be closed.

    - GLODD

  5.     
    #4
    Member

    The Poetry Thread

    Sweet poems guys, you have talent. I wrote this one a while back, it's about the downfall of society.


    Iconoclast
    help us find the difference in right and wrong,
    when all our rights come undone.
    help us see blue skies on a rainy day,
    and celebrate all of society's decay.

    It made us,
    it granted us,
    it saved us,
    it damned us
    it owns us
    it rules enthroned over us.

    we made it
    we granted it
    we saved it
    we damned it
    we own it
    it rules enthroned over us.

    how can we see, we thrash around blindly,
    victims of our own stupidity,
    we cut ourselves down then sublimely,
    come to our senses then turn back around
    and fall back down, down, down into our calamity.

    Our acrid stench engulfs us,
    we try to escape but it follows us.
    Though its ours it repulses us,
    and slowly begins to swallow us.

    Wallowing around in our beautiful cesspool
    shame! it's not called success you fool!
    Its called sinking down into our endless muck,
    now thanks to you we can never be unstuck!

    Now we're stuck, and we're swimming in our guilt.
    looking around at this house we've built,
    "Tear it down! Burn it to the ground!" you say,
    But after all your efforts, it doesn't even sway.

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    #5
    Junior Member

    The Poetry Thread

    We breathe the haze of this sticky green
    I fly higher than any cloud soarin
    It gives me the insperation
    to write this lyricall cocaine
    line by line
    your brain snorts it all
    as you bleed nothing but ink
    through your veins
    writing in calligraphy
    letting these words describe
    my world

  7.     
    #6
    Member

    The Poetry Thread

    Meh it has no title i just wrote it in class today doesn't rhyme just me writing down how i felt.

    did i do something?
    or am i paranoid?
    i thought we were going to spend some time together.
    is it me?
    or am i dillisuional?
    am i seeing something that isn't there?
    its happening again, De ja vu
    this is how it started before
    i love you, loved you.
    shit i don't know anymore
    when i'm with you there is no doubt.
    but when were with other people i start to wonder.
    and when were apart i can't help but think,
    Why are we together.
    are we right?
    is it right?
    i don't know anymore.
    i thinks its paranoia.
    i think i'm dillusional.
    I just hate myself for thinking like this!

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    #7
    Senior Member

    The Poetry Thread

    She stands below the evening storm
    Thoughts of a life passing by
    The darkness of a empty farm
    And the silence of the sky

    She hopes that day will come
    He'll travel this way again
    She knows the search has begun
    Looking for that lifetime friend

    In time, that light will come
    Shining in his eyes
    All her dreams will become one
    The highest of all highs

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    #8
    Senior Member

    The Poetry Thread

    Bag of leaf
    Bag of life
    Bag of vapor
    From one bag
    Through another
    On a stream of air
    Bag of weed
    From bag seed
    I sweat and bleed
    Light... Air... Water
    For another bag
    For another day

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    #9
    Senior Member

    The Poetry Thread

    Carefully wrapped
    Paper flowers
    For the patient
    To ease the pain
    Long and thin
    A paper tulip
    Made of flowers
    To ease the pain
    A bouquet of flowers
    Fills the air
    A blooming miracle
    To ease the pain

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    #10
    Senior Member

    The Poetry Thread

    Roots in a bucket
    Reaching for light
    Twelve hours of sunmaster
    Twelve hours of night
    Emerald canopy
    Elegant and lush
    Roots in a bucket
    Remember to flush!

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