Did you ever think of switching up the stanzas?
beachguy in thongs Reviewed by beachguy in thongs on . some lyrics i wrote, need criticism! okay so i havent really thought of a melody, or even a chord progression, i just started writing and this is what came out... --------------------------------------------------------------- i looked into your eyes and found songs worth singing i looked into your soul and found no reason for leaving your hand brushed mine and my heart felt like swinging smoke danced around the ember of my cigarette, our eyes met and they havent left yet... i saw a world full of people waiting for a sign Rating: 5