Deffinatly looking smokable! Exellent for a first roll, well in.
Just a tip, I see its thicker in the middle than either end. To stop that, prepare the mixture in the wrap so that it's got the least at the roach progressively getting thicker towards the end you light, giving you the coned effect. If you tried that, but found it all just kept falling out the end as you rolled, leave a few cm's gap at the end to allow space for the mixture to roll out.
Happy toking.