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    Dreamality (A Poem)

    Mary Jane, Mary Jane
    I heard you were a bad girl from my parents
    they told me to stay away
    they said they used to like you, but not anymore

    Mary Jane, Mary Jane
    the nice police officer
    even told me you were a bad bad girl

    But, I wasn't even into girls yet
    And, then I got into girls
    Finally a friend introduced me to you

    Wow. You overwhelmed me.
    I was so happy that I couldn't stop smiling.
    I looked in the mirror.
    my eyes were as red as the devil,
    and i couldn't stop smiling.

    a couple more times,
    we met, but,
    you scared me
    to be honest

    afterwards, i would say,
    i looked in the mirror,
    and i could not stop smiling,
    and that scared me.
    but, i was really
    afraid of that "happy feeling"
    because i liked it so much,
    and i was told you were
    a bad bad girl by so many people

    how many years was it?
    9? 10?
    I saw your smoky figure from a distance
    Sometimes I would catch a whiff of your scent
    walking through a neighborhood at night
    But, then I thought, I would like to see you again

    I had a friend again that knew you
    He said he could hook us up
    So this time, I saw you,
    I remembered our first time, and my mouth watered
    I breathed you in, closed my eyes
    and exhaled you like a man

    For the next two hours,
    I did not know dreams or reality
    I lived in a dreamality
    And it was lovely
    My world wandered
    and eyes shut saw visions
    the music made shapes, colors danced across
    my mind
    and it was so lovely, and so good

    Mary Jane, Mary Jane
    your smoky figure wrapped my mind
    in you and i could feel you
    all through me
    amazing
    enveloping
    lovely

    You seemed to me now to be
    my smoky sexy mistress
    oh i love this
    dirty slut, naughty whore
    my secret bad mistress
    a bad bad girl
    but I love her

    I because of you,
    I would become amazing at Halo
    it seemed you made me almost invincible
    in my dreamality
    so i realized you somehow enhanced my mind
    but how could this be.
    oh, you bad bad girl
    your naughty whore,
    how I love you

    We danced together in the dreamality we created
    we laughed and played in the sunshine
    like children
    and somehow you seemed so sweet and innocent then
    have you changed?
    or maybe it's because i see you differently
    you sweet young girl, yet somehow wise
    dancing in the sunshine
    how i love you

    Mary Jane, Mary Jane
    i breathed you in, and breathed you out
    you opened my eyes
    to your virginity
    i saw visions of your fertility
    your heart is full of purity
    you are the tree of life to me
    your mind is set on liberty
    you are the tree of life to me
    and now i see you are the goddess
    in the form of a blazing tree
    angry nomad Reviewed by angry nomad on . Dreamality (A Poem) Mary Jane, Mary Jane I heard you were a bad girl from my parents they told me to stay away they said they used to like you, but not anymore Mary Jane, Mary Jane the nice police officer even told me you were a bad bad girl But, I wasn't even into girls yet Rating: 5

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    #2
    Senior Member

    Dreamality (A Poem)

    Very well done angry nomad:thumbsup: Awsome word: Dreamality

  4.     
    #3
    Senior Member

    Dreamality (A Poem)

    I like the almost conversation-like quality of it. Good stuff! I like how you give personification to the smoke

  5.     
    #4
    Senior Member

    Dreamality (A Poem)

    well written poem man, i liked the personification as well

  6.     
    #5
    Senior Member

    Dreamality (A Poem)

    Thanks everyone. I was so stoned when I wrote it, I wasn't sure if the memory was a dream, but I found it just now. hehheh

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