Quote Originally Posted by chisme
i bet no one would think i was an amazing artist if i cam out with a lyrics like this

Especially in my pastel, my bape shit
Act like you can't tell who made this
New gospel homey take six, and take this,



how can u say thats talent?
Especially in my pastel, my bape shit
Act like you can't tell who made this
New gospel homey take six, and take this,


Dude you need to look at rhymes in a different way, its not about the last word..
Pastel = Can't tell
Babe shit, made this, take six, take this
Its not just 'shit, this, this'
Its more compound then that, and if you don't understand that then you can shut the fuck up and stop hating on something you have no idea about.

How about Jesus Walks?

You know what the Midwest is?
Young & Restless
Where restless *****z might snatch your necklace
And next these *****z might jack your Lexus
Somebody tell these *****z who Kanye West is
I walk through the valley of Chi where death is
Top floor the view alone will leave you breathless Uhhhh!
Try to catch it Uhhhh! It's kinda hard hard
Getting choked by the detectives yeah yeah now check the method
They be asking us questions, harass and arrest us
Saying "we eat pieces of shit like you for breakfast"


I bet if you looked at that you would have just gone..
"Wow kanye west sucks, look at his rhymes!
'is
necklace
lexus
is
is
breathless'

ITS MORE THAN THAT. Dont touch on shit you know nothin about
L Rag Reviewed by L Rag on . I hate Kanye West. Who's with me? ok kanye west wtf is this guy about? , all i hear from him is about "how he was weak but like now he's stronger" "how he was dying but fought his way back" or sum bollox like that all i can say is when u was weak now your better? mate didnt knwo you then dont like you know, anyone feel the same? another thing is allot of his "lyrics" dont even ryme or go i mean i like lyrics to sorta ave a definition not just saying words because they sounds kinda the same i mean "the docter said i had Rating: 5