I'm telling you this as someone who has written policy briefs and as someone who's worked in a publishing press, hon, you gotta get yourself an editor, or at least a proofreader. Make somebody else read it. Print it out and go over it with a red pen. Because it's "straight-forward", right off the bat, and although I really do agree with your position (I wrote a 25 page paper on exactly the same topic last year) and I admire your enthusiasm (and I don't think you should give up!) I'm very concerned that you're going to get yourself in over your head in some murky, expensive legal waters. People don't get to just jump right to the Supreme Court. It will be years and years of expensive litigation. You will need lawyers. You might make it all the way up through the appellate courts and then the Supreme Court decides they don't even want to hear your case.