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07-11-2007, 10:52 PM #1
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A poem/song I wrote
I thought It was very good.
jdmarcus59 Reviewed by jdmarcus59 on . A poem/song I wrote An Ideal Father Occupied within my mind An outside Figure looking in Show me plad blue business suites And tell me thats what I should believe in Not the course of your 18 holes And certainly not a spectator Never will I stand attention To this superficial convention Rating: 5walk this earth to search and find.
and if you find the truth dont hide.
for this may be your last day to try.
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