you have Mrs. holt being killed twice... once at the beginning, with the axe in her head, and at the end, being run over... otherwise, its pretty good
Maverick15963 Reviewed by Maverick15963 on . The end Of The Ax O0o)O0o)O0o0(warning grafic) Long I know, Im very stoned and a story came to mind.... something i wrote.. Mods- you said we can write any kind of story and if this is to graphic go ahead and erase it, and i will say sorry now :-) This story takes place in this little old hick town on the south boarder of Dakota in the fields. The trees are green and the houses are old. The town consist of maybe 500 people, some come and go or turn up missing. People in this town believe their is a murder amongst them. Every now Rating: 5