Man... althought i never had heard a song in this style, its very good! I loved the slow (ritual-like) drums, and the dark, somber, bass! Your voice is very good too, reminds me the singer of a known band... but cant remember who... The guitar solos are very nice, i only think the volume of the guitar was too loud for the another instruments... the guitar were not "blended" with the music, but sounded separate... i cant describe well, but is this. And i would suggest a bit less of distortion/overdrive/whatever in the guitar also...
Anyway, besides this small things, i think your song is pretty damn good, and im sure it can make success!
So, good luck, and keep playin! :thumbsup: