Input on a song a wrote and recorded

[Tomorrow Never Knows]

This is a song I wrote and recorded in 5 hour span. I played the lead, and rhythm guitar and drums along with singing the lead vocal. I am a high tenor and I am singing at the top of my range from A above middle C, to C# two above middle C (think the chorus in Tiny Dancer, or the chorus in Immigrant Song). Steelbyrd is not my actual band just a name for solo recording. As always this song is copyright protected. Thanks for any input. :thumbsup:

Tomorrow Never Knows Reviewed by Tomorrow Never Knows on 06-30-2007. Input on a song a wrote and recorded This is a song I wrote and recorded in 5 hour span. I played the lead, and rhythm guitar and drums along with singing the lead vocal. I am a high tenor and I am singing at the top of my range from A above middle C, to C# two above middle C (think the chorus in Tiny Dancer, or the chorus in Immigrant Song). Steelbyrd is not my actual band just a name for solo recording. As always this song is copyright protected. Thanks for any input. :thumbsup: Rating: 5

[Tomorrow Never Knows]

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[Coelho]

Man... althought i never had heard a song in this style, its very good! I loved the slow (ritual-like) drums, and the dark, somber, bass! Your voice is very good too, reminds me the singer of a known band... but cant remember who... The guitar solos are very nice, i only think the volume of the guitar was too loud for the another instruments... the guitar were not "blended" with the music, but sounded separate... i cant describe well, but is this. And i would suggest a bit less of distortion/overdrive/whatever in the guitar also...
Anyway, besides this small things, i think your song is pretty damn good, and im sure it can make success!
So, good luck, and keep playin! :thumbsup:

[thcbongman]

That's sick. Love the fusion element mixed in with darkness. That was like a cross between The Microphones, Mahavishunu Orchestra, with Deicide undertones. Awesome.