First off good job for the first time.

It looks pretty loose. One of the guys that previously posted on this topic said that using a pen is good for the first time is pretty true (That's how I started when I first got into rolling spliffs). When you got the hang of it, try using the card method. This method can make the spliffs more tighter. And now I usually make 2 paper spliffs ...... well usually if Im around some people I'll do that.