I wrote this today. Let me know what you think.

The American Dream Revisited
Everyday a kid gets his fix,
Two pills from the doctor takes away his twitch.
Tweak for the children,
Trips for the tired,
Weed for the lucky,
And Smack for the dieing.
They hook all them up,
And jail us for trying.
The American dream?
You have to be joking.
I want whatever my country is smoking.
scream Reviewed by scream on . The American Dream Revisited I wrote this today. Let me know what you think. The American Dream Revisited Everyday a kid gets his fix, Two pills from the doctor takes away his twitch. Tweak for the children, Trips for the tired, Weed for the lucky, And Smack for the dieing. They hook all them up, Rating: 5