Well I have just got done with my first resume. I was wanting to get some feedback. SO be honest, if you see anything you think I should take out or reword let me know. Ill just post the parts I had to write out, and not the work history part.

I am a friendly, self motivated, team player who strives to succeed in any given environment. I have a lot of computer and internet experience, as well as good communication skills. I love to learn, and I am always up for a new challenge. I adjust to new environments quickly, and get along well with others, while also working efficiently on my own. I am a self motivated person as well as detail oriented. I am seeking a position where I can develop and excel while giving my best to an employer. I was out of the work force for a short time. I was unhappy with my previous situation and decided to do some soul searching. I am very eager to return to work.




I have excellent people skills which allow me to have great communication with others around me. I am a very social person who loves helping others as much as possible. I am very eager to learn new things, solve problems, and whatever I do, I always do it to the best of my ability.



Thats pretty much it. While I was googling how to do a resume they said to keep it short and sweet. So what ya think, I dont think it flows very well but cant figure out how to change it and I say I way to much.
Dro_Princess Reviewed by Dro_Princess on . Need some feedback. Well I have just got done with my first resume. I was wanting to get some feedback. SO be honest, if you see anything you think I should take out or reword let me know. Ill just post the parts I had to write out, and not the work history part. I am a friendly, self motivated, team player who strives to succeed in any given environment. I have a lot of computer and internet experience, as well as good communication skills. I love to learn, and I am always up for a new challenge. I adjust Rating: 5