rate my rap

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Originally Posted by CYRAX

5, not really what I'm into.

here's afew bars of mine.

The disrespect alerted me, you never even herda me//
you can't comit a murda gee, cant even convert a key//

how can i marry a hoe, they want me cuz i carry a O//
weaponless visonairy fosho, soon to bump on ya stereo//

these cats is gatless, they got guns with more springs then a matress//
got nothin to do with blackness, im just reviving mainstream wackness//

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Please don't revive mainstream whackness. We don't want it.

Do you guys read?

I grew up on nwa, too short, dj quik, and alot of West Coast Rap..
So check this hehe. And I noticed you guys just like to B.Rap. Pointless but fun.
No story really.


If there ever was a time and a place to say
All the lyrics in my spirit then today is the day
If I ever take for granted what I have in my life
Am I worthy of the kingdom and worthy of his light?
So Don't second guess yourself in pursuit of your wealth
Fuck opinions of the masses its bad for your health
Everytime I feel I quit I lose a piece of myself
But my visions my decision, wheres the feelings I felt.
So don't get a tight grip, relax and just unwind
Remember why you're here and what you need to find
Fuck a dolla bill cause I still have time
Now picture me rolling in the back of your mind
And think of the muthafuckin facts and bless reality
Cause your untaped talent equates, fatality
Cause you might as well be dead if you havent figure out
Your passion and your purpose homey what chu all about.

Rep Pro.G

Every aspiring artist..

"Can I get a beat." lol If I had a dolla for every artist I ran into thinking they were the shit I wouldn't have to work. Not puting you guys down its just hilarious how many people get influenced by known artists and pretty much emulate what they hear. If I let you spit on my mic. I can tell you who you listen to in the first 20 seconds. Don't listen too close guys you might come off too much like your idols, and whats new about that music. Might as well kareoke.

For that matter, please don't rap on known track instrumentals. As soon as someone gives me a demo and some dre beats come on and some mexican or whoever starts to rap all fucked up. Its turned off and exited the building. Lol

Bullshit hip-hop / rap has been around a long time now, the trend is shifting, but now its all about saying how fucked up the industry is and the quality of the music. Now nas is saying the same shit I was saying years ago. Pretty much about their style. First it was NY then it was the West coast Now its the South.. Sigh... Yo can I get some canadien rap eh?

DISCLAIMER: I'm not comparing myself to Nas but for the example, the trend is being adopted by many trying to cash in on whats true. BTW I didn't know Jay Z was the ceo of rap... LOL I don't own "A" JZ cd, his shit is tired.. he didn't make 10 albums+ he made one album 10 times.

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Originally Posted by robert42

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No offence but the lyrics were very negative

and we got enought negative stuff out there as it is

LETS GET POSITIVE
GET CONCIOUS

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Hell yea bro. Lets get innovative, bring those blues back, what the hell happened to pimps and love.

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Originally Posted by CYRAX

who the fuck wack nuff to kopy kayy?//
better tune up or resume the sloppy way//

you mispelled bout half your strains//
i carry nugs that smash ya brains//

son you too far from perfection//
opposite sex decline your erection//

shells leave ya blood thicker then glue n' syrup//
you in my hood can be like da 40's, a jew in europe//


hahah, just playing man, fucking around, all fun and games.

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Wanna Track battle? I'm up for some fun..

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Originally Posted by Prunedale

"Can I get a beat." lol If I had a dolla for every artist I ran into thinking they were the shit I wouldn't have to work. Not puting you guys down its just hilarious how many people get influenced by known artists and pretty much emulate what they hear. If I let you spit on my mic. I can tell you who you listen to in the first 20 seconds. Don't listen too close guys you might come off too much like your idols, and whats new about that music. Might as well kareoke.
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so.....yeah, im not an aspiring artist, i just think it would be kinda cool to have an actual cd with me spitting on it....you know?
as for being influenced, yeah i guess i was, but people from all genres of music put down whats on their mind.....and for me....murder is on my mind most of the time.....so yeah

I dunno man, it doesn't really flow that well

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Originally Posted by OniEhtRedrum781

I dunno man, it doesn't really flow that well

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eh, maybe not while reading it...but the way i spit it flows just fine....i rhyme pretty fast so idk

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Originally Posted by MastaChronic

so.....yeah, im not an aspiring artist, i just think it would be kinda cool to have an actual cd with me spitting on it....you know?
as for being influenced, yeah i guess i was, but people from all genres of music put down whats on their mind.....and for me....murder is on my mind most of the time.....so yeah

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Wonder if its the other way around.. You think because you hear, therefore you're a bit induced to be thinking that way, and since the power of thought is one of the most powerful things why do you waste that time and think of that.

Just a honest question. I'm not a hater and wish for you to get better with everything you do. Including your rap dream. =) let us hear your flow then just do it on any instrumental you find that will go with it. I'm a bit interested now lol

And sorry dude I call em artists because I like to give the respect of their position. You'd be an artist to me.

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Originally Posted by Prunedale

Wonder if its the other way around.. You think because you hear, therefore you're a bit induced to be thinking that way, and since the power of thought is one of the most powerful things why do you waste that time and think of that.

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ive been dreaming of mass murder and and shit way before i ever picked up my first icp cd....way before i was ever into music
i didnt think you were a hater man, we're cool