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Great paper! Other then a few minor grammatical mistakes, the body was very solid, engaging, and informative. The only problem I saw was with the introductory paragraph and conclusion paragraph. The thesis seemed to be that the war on Illegal Drugs was immoral and a failure, but the paper soley focused on marijauna. I'm not saying this was bad at all, merely that you should change the war on "Illegal Drugs" to a war on marijauna.
very nice. we have a rule at my school that makes it not allowed to write pro drug papers :(
holy shit...nightcrawler has a point...but besides that, i think ive already commented lol but great essay
"Marijuana does not destroy any cellular tissue, however habitual use causes a fatty layer to form around the brain, slowing activity."
Is this realy true? If so can you give me the source. pls thx
thats why i said re-wordQuote:
Originally Posted by NightProwler
google wont pic up a sentence that means the same thing with completly differnt words
no stupid he was talking about what if the author of teh essays professor searches one sentence from his paper and discovers cannabis.com....thats what he was saying
there was a documentry on tv not long ago showing a study of heavy cannabis use and its link to psychosis. the outcome of it showed that not everyone will develop the illness but people who smoke it regulary have an increased chance of getting it.Quote:
Originally Posted by stothelutz
as for the essay im suprised there are no refrences from sources to backup your claims, did you leave them out?