im not sure i like it...the writing doesnt flow too nicely...the lines arent broken up inton stanzas...and there is lots of generalization...
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im not sure i like it...the writing doesnt flow too nicely...the lines arent broken up inton stanzas...and there is lots of generalization...
Oh, say can you see by the bud that I light
What so proudly we inhaled at the reefer's last smoking?
Whose broad nugs and bright crystals through the perilous bowl,
O'er the movies we watched while so gallantly toking?
And the cherry's red glare, the smoke rising in air,
Gave proof through the night that our bud was still there.
Oh, say does that crystally reefer yet blaze
O'er the land of the high and the home of the dazed?
nice, may i add 1 little fix "what so proudly we INHALE at the reefer's last smoking" just a suggestion.
420
now that should be the anthem easy and short
Sure, why not?Quote:
Originally Posted by dark0ne
could use work...
i wouldn't consider it anything like an anthem
maybe something a stoned 7 year old could play hop-scotch too... maybe?
Anyways, peter tosh already did the weed anthem. It's called "Legalize it" , i think?
well in any case i always considered bob marley's smoke two joints to be my personal smoke anthem
i think marley's friend did that song????
marley may have covered it, but some one else did it... may have been peter tosh :-)
then sublime did it... :-) yAY!
Actually, Smoke Two Joints was originally written by The Toyes.
http://www.thetoyes.com/smoke2joints.html
yeah
i knew it was someone else... besides marley
wasn't sure who, thanks for clearing that up though.......... everyone thinks he marley did that song, but somebody told me that marley was friends with whoever wrote that song.