If you like Science Fiction (and getting caught in the rain)...

I started work on a science fiction story just a little while ago. I can't tell if its crap or not, and whether or not I should finish it. If you like it, let me know.

Here's what I got so far:


This is the story of a universe, an existence, very much similar to our universe, our existence. At what could be considered the Beginning of this existence of this universe, there existed nothing. Nothing, except for Zio. Zio, was the Keeper of this Universe, the Universe of Beo.

Sometime during existence, Zio grew lonely, and wished for another life-force, another mateo, to share his infinite passion with. So, he decided to create two separate energy forces, the Eeija, and the Aeina. The Eeija, representing all that was light in the world, everything that was Illumni. And the Aeina, representing all that was darkened in the world, everything that was Nehilid.

Zio then combined these two energies into one large mass that exploded into a kaleidoscopic creation of the universe. After 6 days the Plani, the Staryui, and the Spacyo settled into a revolving infinite pattern. Zio celebrated his work of art by creating the Sayons.

The Alpha Sayon was the first Sayonic being to ever be born upon the Plani Sayon. Plani Sayon was one of six plani that revolved around a large, Illumnati-Staryui, called Silo.

A lot of weird and wonderful names there, yes it's a good story, should be cool when finished.

Also, I don't like pina colada's and getting caught in the rain, thanks :D

That's the thing I'm worried about, I'm trying not to make all the names too complicated and hard to remember, but I want to create a completely different environment free of labels, so I can create a completely new image of the universe.

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Originally Posted by Caruso329

That's the thing I'm worried about, I'm trying not to make all the names too complicated and hard to remember, but I want to create a completely different environment free of labels, so I can create a completely new image of the universe.

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It sounds very interesting (and time consuming lol) :)

When it's finished it will be great I'm sure :D

Maybe a little bit too much confusing

But the main idea is good

Good luck man!

Yea, I think I am sober enough to go back and simplify a lot of those names and ideas.