I see a cold stare

I see a cold stare
prepared and undeclared
cold but bold
shining like metalics
leaning right like it was it italic
hair on all ends like it was static
shock or suprised?
can we at least talk about this
perhaps comprimise
mother cries
child dies
mother scourned
child reborn
from hell to heaven
he leaves war torn

little do they know























and such things

I'm sorry you had to go through all that, Robbie. :sadcrying

u like that one/?

i think its my best yet lol

Still, the content is the issue. Half of it is describing a "cold stare" that's never revealed.

I like your poem my friend.

Keep writting... You'll get better and better at it.

Keep posting them also! :)

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Originally Posted by turtle420

I like your poem my friend.

Keep writting... You'll get better and better at it.

Keep posting them also! :)

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thanks a fan!

Beachguy i know what ur saying but my poemsare crazy funny stoned peoms like 10 second write what i think poems. :p

Well, you got me beat
You got my ass hanging right off this seat
But, there is not no way
That you can be gay
Cause Robert42 is always discreet

lmao good1 beachguy ;) i shall make a response soon lol