Faik...

Check out my band

You might like us if you like Nu metal

or korn...

Have a listen please tell me what u think,


btw, its a real rough version,

vocalist should be shot and lyrics should be burned and it all sounds the same you asked for my critiscm but good effort

I listened to it and it is exactly why i hate rock music but if it was y i liked rock i would toatally go for it.

Damn. That was gay.


Sorry that you guys suck, not tryin to be mean, just, you do.

thats fair.

well its fair if you have a good knowledge of the music genre to compair to.

:eek: wtf

the vocals need some compression...not to mention theyre mixed way too hot compared to the rest of the track. its like the weakest part of the song shouldnt be twice as loud ;)

but um.. focusing on whats good with the song. . .the guitar sounds ok...everything is keeping decent time. so at least you have that to work with! Just mix that shit better!
But yea like dude said before.. good effort. keep practicing. :cool:

i know the downfall is mainly the singing, but at the time we were like 14 it was our first song. we basically recorded it with scraps of equipment at our school.

were just not the kind of band to change members tho as were like best mates.

I think this song has potential, if you took it to a proffesional recording studio, and we took time to record everything and get the effects rite, then it could be good. and maybe and expert on hand to help with mixing.

ah i dont know, were like the biggest band in town.. (not sucha big town mind) and were not gonna give up anyway...

weve got years and years to practise and develope our style

here are my tips:

a second guitar would be good

change your singer, sometimes he haves this gay voice and now he tries to do some black metal voice, doesnt mix togetehr dude

and song should chnage a bit of rythmic sometimes. its just a lil bit boring to hear alkways the same rythm

anyway good luck with your band