hey i write lyrics, i wrote this song in about 5-10 miniutes...i need to know if it is any good, it is for my band and we play mailnly modern indie rock, so tell me what you think and be honest
i gotta break out
before i break down
repetition never ending
your words flailing around
the pain fills the void
that plauges my heart
the pain fills my void
as soon as i start
its better to love a loser
than it is to lose a lover
your others not perfect
but theres no other
for you
im gonna break out
before i break down
hush your pretty lips
dont even think a sound
i love the pain
i feel inside
intense agony like
a dagger in my side
its better to love a loser
than it is to lose a lover
your others not perfect
but theres no other
for you
when shes all ive got
where do i turn to when shes not there
shes all ive got
where do i turn to
i turn to no where
